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My heart is always in this bind

This girl, she's always on my mind

Every night i go to sleep

And it's a secret i just can't keep

She doesn't feel the way i do

I just want her to love me too

I see her everywhere i go

It's just so hard for me, you know?

All i do is lay around,

I feel as though i'm in the ground

The pressure building in my chest

As i put my warped mind to rest

I'm afraid that she'll never know

My passion is a pure as snow

So innocent and yet so strong

I know that we'll always get along

Perhaps as nothing more than friends

This is how my story ends

This story of my life, you see

It's just the kind of life for me

It may be tough of that i'm sure

But His great love keeps me secure

Without His glory i'd be lost

His son has paid the ultimate cost

For my sins and heartache so,

He gave his life, as clean as snow

That i might live someday again

And then, i'll finally be rid of sin

I can't wait till i get there

To meet the angels in the air

But one of them i'm waiting to see

Is my true love, the one for me



Dedicated to my current heartbreak, if only she really knew........
©2008-2009 ~mrburcham424
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Author's Comments

One of my first poems........i know i like romantic crap from time to time.

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:iconmrburcham424:
I've got a couple more if someone wants me to upload them.
:iconkate-twilighter-1:
thats cute;
and sad,
and even though i don't know you,
sorry to hear about yer current heartbreak;
ikno how you feel.


but still,
i like it [:

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Well-Behaved Women S E L D O M make history [:
:iconphantom-apparition:
It is very nice. I like that although it has a sad tone there is still a brighter point to it, not just endless despair.

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Generousity is not an act, it's a lifestyle.
:iconmallykatt:
This is very powerful, so many different heartstrings to play. While I have to say I can totally relate to the whole first part of the poem, loving someone from a distance, the second part is amazing. Without Christ's love (which I assume your writing about) I would be nowhere. I don't favorite a lot of literature, but this piece really speaks to me, well done.

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God gave us eyes to see the beauty in art and hearts to see the beauty in each other


Murielle Deorwynn, Avalon Student in ~Elysian-Academy
:iconaxelblade:
EPIC!

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*!CHEEZE!*
:iconjfaith:
It was sad at first, but grew hopeful and happy towards the end. :] It's a really nice way to look at things.

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Lost in love...
...I dream a dream...
I fall in love with falling in love.

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